Cacophonaut

Theres a stranger standing over my bed
And his face is the mirror of my own
He is reaching for the candle above my head
To snuff out the flame before its allowed to grow
And I am a stone, I am a stone
Thrown correctly I make it back home
Or else sink to the bottom
And lie there alone
I dont know
And my movements are forced out of motion
Like a lifetimes worth of growth
As the trees in the autumn look like scorched lungs
I am smothered by a design of my own
And I am a stone, I am a stone
Whose weight wont allow or condone
Such a flight which
Its heart is so prone
Falling slow
I burn something, anything for that power
Watch the tendrils of smoke float up like angels wings
And I'll sit in that solace like a coward
And think of betrayal and other things
I am the moss you cast of as you roll
With the prospect of sharing your throne
And the spark was eventually lost and outgrown
Or alone, blameless and unknown
To blame all but a cause of my own
In the wake of my passage
No ripples are grown
I am a stone

abecfive

"And think of betrayal and other things"

I don't like that just because it's leaves it too open ended, I'd rather hear what those other things are.

Eliana

i don't know, something about this song just doesn't appeal to me. It's not the idea, i think its just the wording...but the idea has potential, i like what i think is the chorus but yeah.

Good luck with any other songs

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