Song: Stranded On An Island - Writers Forum

Yustynn · 11-12-2007, 03:31 AM

Hi everyone! Haven't posted in a while but I hope to start again soon. Anyway, I just wrote this song. It's a work in progress and I'm not sure if you'll find it all that great, but here it is anyway.

Stranded On An Island

I'm standing here on my own
Looking out at the sea around me
The water splashing against my feet
And somehow all that does is scare me

I'm here all alone
With no one to talk to
Stranded on an island on my own
As time goes by
Who will I talk to?

I just wanna go home

When I look around me all I see
Is the sea and a bunch of trees
A whole lotta sand and a whole lotta grass
How am I gonna make it as the days go past?

Maybe I'll build a boat and sail away
Get out here and to another place
Civilization's waiting for me
The island's holding me prisoner and I wanna be set free

And I'm here all alone
With no one to talk to
Stranded on an island on my own
As time goes by
Who will I talk to?

I just wanna go home

I just wanna go home

I just wanna go home

Yustynn · 11-12-2007, 03:36 AM

Whoops accidentally double-posted

Eliana · 11-12-2007, 03:55 AM

yeah, it has potential, i like it....the way I'm visualizing it to be sung is rather cool, because i have on wrote one song which is in fact on this forum, it think it sounds good....I'm actually thinking of starting a full-on rock band with no-one to join it...so yeah...as my personal opinion, i thought it was great!!

8 stars out of 10

Gallaxy · 11-12-2007, 05:46 AM

This reminded me of how i felt when i lived with mum and how i saw my bedroom as a prison cell, just hoping to be set free one day

Yustynn · 11-14-2007, 02:30 AM

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Originally Posted by Gallaxy

This reminded me of how i felt when i lived with mum and how i saw my bedroom as a prison cell, just hoping to be set free one day

Wow that's a way of looking at your room I never thought about