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Old 11-11-2007, 10:14 AM   #1
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Lanta

She sits there by the window
watching her life go by
and now she's almost crying
thinking about that guy
was every look he ever gave her
just another lie

she feels so alone

And now she doesnt know
what she truly wants
her friends tell her to move on
but she knows she cant
she just wants to hold him in her arms
and call him her own
his friends would make his life hell
and its something she cant condone

she doesnt know what to do

she wants to ask for him number
but shes afraid he'll decline
and if she asks
all his friends will laugh
and say what a waste of time
she doesnt want her heart broken
its small enough as it is
and body and soul
shes got nothing at all left to give

she just wants him to love her
for who she truly is.
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Old 11-12-2007, 03:34 AM   #2
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Wow that's a pretty nice song. Really emotional
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Old 11-12-2007, 03:50 AM   #3
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yeah....it is rather good, does this song relate to any real life situations? cuz if it is, you really communicated it
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Old 11-12-2007, 06:45 AM   #4
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thanks=] yes ^^ i wrote it in the back of my maths book, it was kind of about a guy i know lol
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