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Old 11-10-2007, 10:01 PM   #1
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Song- She Hides it Well

(Verse)
She sat there on that old wooden bench,
Watching a copper sunset.
I heard her singing a song from our past,
About a boy and girl…

(Verse)
That seemed to be our life story.
Each day revolving off of that.
She hurts inside, but she keeps on singing
Her voice flowing easily with empathy…

(Chorus)
She hides her pain.
Behind her mask of a beautiful smile,
A face of porcelain,
And eyes of brilliant blue,
But still, she hides it well.

(Bridge)
She keeps on singing…
The same song each sunset…
I watch for a while…
And then begin to smile…

(Chorus 2)
She hides her pain
Behind a mask of a beautiful smile,
A face like steel,
And eyes with full control,
But still, she hides it well.


She sat there on that old wooden bench,
Watching a copper sunset…

She hides it well…
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Old 11-10-2007, 10:56 PM   #2
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Its quite sad there, but really quite good as well.

I like the

She keeps on singing…
The same song each sunset…
I watch for a while…
And then begin to smile…

part a lot. It stuck with me after I finished reading it. Just curious, but what genre of music would this be played to? (I’m guessing a slow-ish guitar?)

-Bryce out
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Old 11-10-2007, 11:02 PM   #3
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yeppers. Most of my songs just go with a guitar.
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