T.W. North

It sucks you in
Rips you out
No compromising
It's just a virus
(It's just a virus)

Decay is forever
Suffocating the hope
Soldiers of fortune miss out on the best
Stab in the dark and grabbing on air
Reaching the ocean and starting again
Nothing can stop the end

Erase yourself
Burn it all
Until nothing good is left
Throw it away
Everything
Until nothing good is left

Splendid direction
Forced on a bend
Destroyers of freedom lose out in the end
Cast out the line, feed on the catch
Standing redemption, breathing in sand
Nothing can stop the end

Erase yourself
Burn it all
Until nothing good is left
Throw it away
Everything
Until nothing good is left
Nothing good is left

It sucks you in
Rips you out
No compromising
It's just a virus
(It's just a virus)
It's just a virus

twitch

I like it, but you made a few mistakes. Like the abnormal rhyme pattern. Some verses rhymed almost every line and others rhymes once, keep it one way or the other please. And, the title doesn't really match.

T.W. North

The rhyming was completely accidental, but it doesn't matter anyway. The verses are screamed (this is a metalcore song). Plus, the title DOES fit if you bother to think about it.

Damian_Rucci

I disagree with twitch. It's sounds like a metalcore song and the lyrics match the title. I like it

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