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10-30-2007, 08:13 PM
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Shadow
I hate the way you look at me,
Yes I use execive profanity,
Why is that you look and talk just like me?
It's like everything I touch is gold,
Your simple gaze lines it with mold.
You'd light up with a simple touch,
Your obsession is far too much.
You look up at me like I look down to you
When I speak my mind you look so fucking blue,
Every single word is true.
I repeat my words every single day,
Back off bitch, you're fuckin' gay
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It's like you are, my god damned shadow,
everything that I care to do,
Is duplicated by assholes just like you,
I know you think I'm your fucking friend,
But I say it now this shit must end.
When I say 'back off dude'
I understand that I'm 'So fucking rude'
But I've had up to here with you,
your obbsession shines right through
Your attempts to befriend me,
You little shit you filthy flea,
I hate that you think I'm cool,
Do you take me for a fucking fool?
((chorus))
It's like you are, my god damned shadow,
everything that I care to do,
Is duplicated by assholes just like you,
I know you think I'm your fucking friend,
But I say it now this shit must end.
((chorus))
It's like you are, my god damned shadow,
everything that I care to do,
Is duplicated by assholes just like you,
I know you think I'm your fucking friend,
But I say it now this shit must end.
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11-03-2007, 08:22 PM
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noone likes it
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11-03-2007, 08:53 PM
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It's like everything I touch is gold,
Your simple gaze lines it with mold.
Two nice lines you have there. But the rest was mediocre, poorly worded and didn't flow. It was so rough and out of touch. I mean, I understand being mad...but you insulted "Gay's" and went all out on, as you put it 'excessive profanity'.
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With hands held high unto the sky so blue
The ocean opens up to swallow you
Mike Shinoda
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11-03-2007, 10:01 PM
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Stop cursing in your lyrics, goddamn it, it's been done too much. Rap or go the shit Chemical route, but don't expect to earn the slightest respect.
"you're fuckin' gay"
Isn't that fucking artistic.
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11-03-2007, 10:27 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Voodoo
Stop cursing in your lyrics, goddamn it, it's been done too much. Rap or go the shit Chemical route, but don't expect to earn the slightest respect.
"you're fuckin' gay"
Isn't that fucking artistic.
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I salute you.
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You know what I'm gonna do, I'm gonna go post spam in the lyrics section and post idiotic messages in the fiction section and then I'm going to go into the debate section and I'm gonna post a whole lot of nothing, and after that I'm going to start 20 page arguements about homosexuality. You know why? Because I'm a human being that wants to make stupid noobish posts and theres nothing you can do to stop me.
Have a nice day.
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11-03-2007, 10:29 PM
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Salute with your member, not your tongue, Lance.
Ooh. Got you, didn't I?
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11-03-2007, 10:30 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Voodoo
Salute with your member, not your tongue, Lance.
Ooh. Got you, didn't I?
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As I do salute you I find you very hypocritical.
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Originally Posted by Voodo
and chilled bud, not to fuck it wit the homies
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It seems that I have got you.
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You know what I'm gonna do, I'm gonna go post spam in the lyrics section and post idiotic messages in the fiction section and then I'm going to go into the debate section and I'm gonna post a whole lot of nothing, and after that I'm going to start 20 page arguements about homosexuality. You know why? Because I'm a human being that wants to make stupid noobish posts and theres nothing you can do to stop me.
Have a nice day.
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11-03-2007, 10:33 PM
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That was a my bad.
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You know what I'm gonna do, I'm gonna go post spam in the lyrics section and post idiotic messages in the fiction section and then I'm going to go into the debate section and I'm gonna post a whole lot of nothing, and after that I'm going to start 20 page arguements about homosexuality. You know why? Because I'm a human being that wants to make stupid noobish posts and theres nothing you can do to stop me.
Have a nice day.
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11-03-2007, 10:36 PM
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Rap, mate.
Rap mocks itself. Especially when every response garners a laugh.
This shit? It's pretense dipped in the balsamic emotion of a lost child.
Are you still consorting with homosexuals, Lance?
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11-03-2007, 10:39 PM
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Are you still consorting with homosexuals, Lance?
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Not quite. Are you a homophobe?
And that is the last time I try to edit while its loading.
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You know what I'm gonna do, I'm gonna go post spam in the lyrics section and post idiotic messages in the fiction section and then I'm going to go into the debate section and I'm gonna post a whole lot of nothing, and after that I'm going to start 20 page arguements about homosexuality. You know why? Because I'm a human being that wants to make stupid noobish posts and theres nothing you can do to stop me.
Have a nice day.
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11-05-2007, 03:07 AM
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Man, I don't think I could be this arrogant and suck this much at the same time. Congradulations.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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11-09-2007, 10:02 PM
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mystery, Saying that someones gay does not automaticly make me arrogant, other then that, please point out what I said.
Other shitstain: I won't even bother to verbally crush the air from your lungs because you have been banned.
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11-10-2007, 05:37 PM
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Originally Posted by twitch
mystery, Saying that someones gay does not automaticly make me arrogant, other then that, please point out what I said.
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I missed the part where I said that, I said that you're arrogant and cocky and yet fail at displaying any qualities which would instigate jealousy.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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11-11-2007, 02:00 AM
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Yet you have never
1. seen me
2. spoke to me (poeple are different in RL then on the interwebz)
3. chatted with me
There are so many other things that you would not know, so how is it that you know that Ihave no qualities that produce jealousy?
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11-11-2007, 04:57 AM
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Ink Slinger
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Quote:
Originally Posted by twitch
Yet you have never
1. seen me
2. spoke to me (poeple are different in RL then on the interwebz)
3. chatted with me
There are so many other things that you would not know, so how is it that you know that Ihave no qualities that produce jealousy?
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I don't, I'm making assumptions on you shitface personality.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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