Winona Corinne

I just wrote this. I haven't written much for a long time, so I'm really excited about it! I appreciate reviews and constructive criticism. Thanks!

"Cassandra"

Only dead men know
What it is to live
And only they know
What it’s like to forgive.

I’m not unhappy
But I like to pretend
I’ve been listening
And only you know the end.
Oh, how does it end?

What do you do
If your tongue speaks no truth
But each time your mouth opens
It speaks up for you?

I’m not sorry
But I like to cry
Because maybe you’ll believe me
If I wet my eyes.
If I wet my eyes…

Oh, Cassandra
No one simply knows
Go is just a euphemism
But this is how it goes.

I’m not unhappy
But I like to pretend
Oh, Cassandra
How does it end?

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~Winona

The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart. - Lois McMaster Bujold

T.W. North

I like. It's slightly detached, but I dunno if that's a bad thing in this case. The bridge is a bit weird though, the wording doesn't seem quite right compared to the rest of the song.

Damian_Rucci

I like it, pretty damn good

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thamior

Could use some more imagery, but on the whole, not a bad piece

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Yustynn

That's pretty cool. It'd make a great song and even a great poem without changing a thing

Winona Corinne

Thank you guys so much!! I really appreciate it.

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~Winona

The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart. - Lois McMaster Bujold