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Old 10-24-2007, 06:31 PM   #1
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"The Bottom"

Hi I wrote another new song this is still rough so please help me out by giving me constructive criticism. If you comment mine I will do it one of yours as well.

"The Bottom"

I walk down this lonely road
Looking for a direction or just an exit
I'm looking for a sign, I know does not exist
I see you shining, like a star
I try to reach you but your just too far
I break through the crowd
Just to find out your not around

You could tell all your friends
Our relationships dead
You can tell all your guys
we were never alive
But you can't lie to yourself

*Chorus*
Why must you be this way?
I'm down to the bottom
And I can't feel a thing
Too many alibis
I'm sorry baby, I'm not one of your perfect guys

I chase after you
But your leaving too soon
Running down these long paths
Just to find myself lost at the end
I'm tired of being just a friend
Can't we be together again?

You could tell all your friends
Our relationships dead
You can tell all your guys
we were never alive
But you can't lie to yourself

*chorus*(2)
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