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Old 10-22-2007, 04:13 PM   #1
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Direction

Direction

My wandering has ended up at nowhere
My reactions won't prove that I care
It seems so wonderful to ponder
But does walking away get me somewhere?

Direction isn't fair
If I get around then I've lost my way
Today doesn't go away
If I get ahead then I've gone astray
Bitter disappointment
As a history keeps recurring

Emotional appeals have caused anxiety
That's insurmountable
It seems like such a wonderful remedy
To walk away from it all

Direction isn't fair
If I get around then I've lost my way
Today doesn't go away
If I get ahead then I've gone astray
Bitter disappointment
As a history keeps recurring

Not an escape, but to start over
Once it's in motion then there's no returning sober
Same old theme, same old dreams
I'm walking away from it all
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The antecedent tries to dilapidate
But those reflections no longer speak so vehemently
A moribund being
Is all that you are now...
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Old 10-22-2007, 04:47 PM   #2
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I like it, but just a tip of advice, songs don't have to rhyme. Don't try to force rhyming in your song. However, I truly enjoyed it, hope to see more from you soon
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