The not so love song - Writers Forum

twitch · 08-25-2007, 11:35 PM

((First verse is soft and slow, gets louder and faster with each verse))

I would give anything for you to tell me you love me too,
I love you would you love me true?
You strawberry blonde hair,
Just give me a chance you know I'll be there.
Is this what love is?
The bubbly feeling like sodas fiz?
I ask you her, you know the rest,
Yes of course, she said yes.

((Chorus))
I love this feeling 'cause it's fucking great,
Love leaves so much to apreciate.
Love and hate, sometimes I don't know which is which,
I'll tell you guys, sometimes life can be a bitch

I'll tell you, I adore you,
and I'm happy that you love me too.
Give me a peck on the cheeck,
from you three simple words make my knees go week.
I would get in a fight just to here you voice,
I hope I made the right choice

((Chorus))
I love this feeling 'cause it's fucking great,
Love leaves so much to apreciate.
Love and hate, sometimes I don't know which is which,
I'll tell you guys, sometimes life can be a bitch

I still love you, you know I do,
I startto lie and you see me right through,
I'm sorry if some of the things I say are untrue.
Now we fight more,
The worst of the fights end with me yelling 'whore'
And I am so sorry....
I still love you baby, you know is do,
but sometimes baby just FUCK YOU

((Chorus))
I love this feeling 'cause it's fucking great,
Love leaves so much to apreciate.
Love and hate, sometimes I don't know which is which,
I'll tell you guys, sometimes life can be a bitch

I can't fucking stand you,
None of my words are untrue,
and most of them say that I fucking hate you.
Your voice, makes me twitch,
like I said in the chorus, life with you can be a bitch.
Don't act like my mother 'I don't like your tone of voice'
I guess I did make the wrong choice.

((Chorus))
I love this feeling 'cause it's fucking great,
Love leaves so much to apreciate.
Love and hate, sometimes I don't know which is which,
I'll tell you guys, sometimes life can be a bitch

((mellow again))
And then I start again, with the same girl,
At first she make me want to laugh, then she makes me want to hurl.
I'll always love you baby,
Kiss you? Just maybe.
SOmetime though, I feel like I'm living with a witch,
Fuck the chorus, LOVE can be a bitch.

((Chorus))
I love this feeling 'cause it's fucking great,
Love leaves so much to apreciate.
Love and hate, sometimes I don't know which is which,
I'll tell you guys, sometimes life can be a bitch

kaytea111 · 08-26-2007, 01:03 PM

ok, I like swearing in a song but this is over the top! exspecially with "Fuck"..but other than that, amazing song, Totally can relate..good job!

twitch · 08-26-2007, 03:21 PM

To me it flows better with them, but thank you

kaytea111 · 08-26-2007, 04:54 PM

like I think it flows reallynicely too, just "Fuck" is repeated too much...but anywho, luv the song! &hearts;