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Old 08-09-2007, 08:12 PM   #1
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Soars

Soars

These open soars,
Are bleeding on the floor,
And you don't know me,
You don't know me anymore,

So just stay away,
Until these soars heal,
I'll never,
I'll never be the same,

You should know,
A stories never told,
Until the end,
The end of it all,

So just stay away,
Until these soars heal,
I'll never,
I'll never be the same,

I'm rotting away,
Slowly I will fade,
But you don't care,
You'll never know me,

Completely...

Completely...

So just stay away,
Until these soars heal,
I'll never,
I'll never be the same,

But now it's over,
The stories been told,
This stories over,
So now I'll fade away,

Goodbye...

Goodbye...

Goodbye (whisper)
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Old 08-10-2007, 12:35 AM   #2
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Nothing really stood out about this song. It was a bit repetitive and just real plain. Keep working on your music and try to use your words in a more interesting way.
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