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Old 08-03-2007, 01:16 AM   #1
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Lonely

Lonely
Written: May 2004 By: B. Carr

As you grow up in life, you see how special a love can be
How another person in life can make a better place to see
If you could just find a person to fulfill a lifetime of happiness
But it seems lately, you can’t find a love that can be

So I search for someone that can be so true
That can find the truth about who you really are
And except that all that you have to give is your everything that has made you blue
And after all of that you see a person who is the same as you

But I’ve been so lonely
And all that I want is some who is so true
To help me see the way through
To be my one and only you

My heart says to myself don’t quit
Because one day you will find someone who is for you
And she will be the one that you will never forget
Then finally the loneliness will be through

So if you’re out there I look for you
And maybe one day I will be with you
But until then, I look for the one who is just like me
So that one-day we will be

But I’ve been so lonely
And all that I want is some who is so true
To help me see the way through
To be my one and only you

But I know you’re out there
And one day, you will be here with me
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Old 08-03-2007, 08:19 AM   #2
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"And except that all that you have to give is your everything that has made you blue"

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Old 08-04-2007, 03:22 AM   #3
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Wow. Nice. MUCH better than your last one. I'm guessing a sort of folksey/acoustic rock sound?
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Old 08-04-2007, 11:03 AM   #4
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Yeah T. W. . I guess I had that same sort of vision. I need to start thinking music a litlle more I guess. Thanks for the feedback.

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