Here's my first draft for a song I'm writing. Please let me know what you think. It might be a bit rough. The chorus isn't finished yet. I'm open to suggestions
I'm not ready to face tomorrow
I don't think i can make it through
I keep thinking about my sorrow
Keep wishing that it wasn't true
Feel like something's blocking my way
Can't stop the train that's infront of me
I'm tied to the railroad and it's
only a matter of time
(Chorus)
Counting down the hours 'til tomorrow
Wishing there was something that could ease me from my sorrow
There's no hero to save me from my own wrong
It's been this way for way too long
It's only a matter of time before I fall
God if you're up there,
Please listen to me pray
let everything be all right
Everything be okay
(Chorus)
Counting down the hours 'til tomorrow
Wishing there was something that could ease me from my sorrow
I'm standing here right now
With problems on my mind
How long has it been?
I'm running out of time
Running out of time......