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Old 07-19-2007, 12:41 PM   #1
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I shall jump on the bandwagon! My rhyme!

I wrote this when I was utterly sick of hearing these fake ass studio rappers make money when the ones with the heart and soul have to try to hustle and scrape for their recognition...

The plan was was to not let me in the game,
I came with different slang when niggas were plain.
I brought metaphors and pain like "wake up!"
But they weren't hearing me until I picked my weight up.
I was grindin in every state but,
Jesus wasn't with me,
the heaters were with me.
I felt like ghosts were trying to get me.
Even me own folks where trying to hit me.
If I were to die broke, I'd die with dignity.
There wasn't a lot of hope but I was shining.
I'm better without diamonds,
I wouldn't be me without rhyimin'.
I'd prolly be you trying to be me,
Clique ridin',
you make me wanna quit tryin'.
You're whole fame done messed up the game.
You wanna act like thugs?
Screw around and get clapped like them,
end up takin a nap like them?
Perhaps I win but lose with a mill.
My voice gives you the chills.
I was alone like both of my parents were killed without leavin' a will.
This is deeper than real.
I wouldn't even go there if it wasn't that i'll.
My thoughts became deep.
I was the artistic wacko.
Puff puff; turned into a late night jackal.
I'm like a whole mack ford, so leave me alone.
I'm a hop skip and a jump from pullin up with a pump and blowin' bodies to chunks...
....but I'm a good girl...
Sorry.
I flat lined till they brought my mic out.
Please don't provoke me.
You don't have enough skills to coach me homie.
You ain't shit,
so how you gonna tell me my songs are hits?
They all ready know that I flow from the soul,
but you're too dumb to know that I'm number one for sure.
Don't stop me.
I got it locked and keyed.
Come box with me and see what I've been working on.
I hate you,
I hate ya'll....
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:43 PM   #2
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Are you black or are you just saying niggas to be 'a bit mental'?
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:44 PM   #3
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Heh.

I'm black, dear.
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:46 PM   #4
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So is Kolo Toure
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:48 PM   #5
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He's darker than me. Lol.

I'm caramel skinned.
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:54 PM   #6
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Beaudiful.
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Old 07-19-2007, 01:57 PM   #7
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Ah. 'Preciate it.
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Old 07-19-2007, 02:01 PM   #8
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^^^ south's answer to Beyonce.
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Old 07-19-2007, 02:14 PM   #9
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Let Beyonce be Beyonce and let me be me.
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