Olly Buckle

Unbrushed and skinny
Going nowhere in a hurry
Flashing looks and moving
See she woke up running
Always after something
Going or coming
Life is now and in a hurry
Leaves no time to worry

Woke up to life's embrace
Flapped the hair back off her face
Pulled on jeans and T-shirt
Instant and decent
I know you've seen her
Babyshambles figure
Life is now and in a hurry
With no time to worry

Flashing glances, sparring words
Always poking where it hurts
Gets stuck in and tells them it
A miracle she don't get hit
Don't care a damn or give a shit
No idea of when to quit
Living now and in a hurry
Still too young to worry

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T.W. North

I like. I like alot. It's so darn simple as well which is awesome, it's simple, it conveys a VERY good message and its catchy. Get a good tune to it and you'll do well. I can see this very much as a Alt Rock jingle...

Mystery

Simple and effective, I like it.

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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...

Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...

Yes, must still shut up.

Olly Buckle

Thanks guys, you both use the term simple and looking back I think I see what you mean, make a mental note not to try to be to damn clever Olly.

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