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Old 07-17-2007, 11:22 PM   #1
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Let's dance like deaed people

VERSE I
she said what are we waiting for
(well im just waiting for)
these doors aren't locking themselves
my guest list is written
and the party is all downstairs
but they are not dancing in here
they are just smiling for tears


CHORUS
(am i happy)2x
do i look happy this way
(are you happy)2x
well you dont look so happy to me


VERSE II
she said lets dance
(no pants)
she didnt mention that
(a gun at her back)
im lying in my bed
and for once im not alone


CHORUS 2x



OUTRO
its funny how people want to talk
when you no longer can
but who cares
do you care
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Old 07-20-2007, 08:45 PM   #2
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That's amazingly written. I love it.
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Old 07-20-2007, 10:25 PM   #3
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That has to be the worst set of lyrics I have ever seen. I want the five seconds it took to read that back.
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