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07-15-2007, 01:45 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In a cardboard box!
Gender: Female
Posts: 270
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Kinda baba
It's just a girl thing,
All up and done,
It's the way us girls do it,
Our way of having fun,
So I wake up ever morning, take my shower, put my makeup on,
I get all prettied up and then I'm gone,
It takes 45 to an hour getting the way I should,
But in the end, damn right I look good,
(Pre-Chorus)
Just some of these days,
I just need to pause it all,
Let my femine side take a break,
And have some dirty, rough, gettin it done fun!!
(Chorus)
Riding all around,
Not giving a damn is what I like to do,
Put my fishing rod into the lake and sitting, kicken back,
I'm scared of bugs, I know,
But sometimes ya just gotta let go,
And be a dirty, rough, gettin it done kinda babe,
What do I wear today? It can never be the same ol' same,
The would truly be a real bad shame,
Gotta spice up my old clothes I just bought last month ago,
Get new accesories, bracelets and all,
Grab your purses girls, lets hit the mall,
(Pre-Chorus)
Just some of these days,
I just need to pause it all,
Let my femine side take a break,
And have some dirty, rough, gettin it done fun!!
(Chorus)
Riding all around,
Not giving a damn is what I like to do,
Put my fishing rod into the lake and sitting, kicken back,
I'm scared of bugs, I know,
But sometimes ya just gotta let go,
And be a dirty, rough, gettin it done kinda babe,
I guess I'm a dirty, rough, gettin it done kinda babe,
Yes I am a prissy! Ditzy! Blonde! kinda babe,
I am a dirty, prissy, rough and ditzy, gettin it done blonde kinda babe,
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07-15-2007, 02:26 PM
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#2
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Scribe
Join Date: May 2007
Gender: Male
Posts: 91
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nice job. sort of different from what you usually right, but it is pretty good
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07-15-2007, 05:30 PM
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#3
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In a cardboard box!
Gender: Female
Posts: 270
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ty, and yea, I'm trying to broaden my variety of lyrics.
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07-17-2007, 03:18 AM
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#4
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Best Seller
Join Date: Jan 2007
Gender: Male
Posts: 585
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Frankly, its alot better than your other lyrics. You're not trying to be sincere but writing with petty things, and thus coming across rather pathetic. Instead it sounds like you're kinda making fun of it all and thus, come across rather more mature. *shrug* It's not brilliant, and certainly not something I'd listen to, but it's a good job by any means.
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