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Old 07-14-2007, 03:02 PM   #1
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Words Of Sorrow

Words Of Sorrow
I hate these words of sorrow
Leaving me to feel this way
I hate these words of sorrow
They stole my yesterday
Words of sorrow
Voices of gloom
It looks like the end will be here soon
And I won’t go down
And fall apart
It’s hard to end
It’s harder to start
I hate these words of sorrow
Leaving me to feel this way
I hate these words of sorrow
They stole my yesterday
Using these words of sorrow
Like there is no tomorrow
Making things seem bad
Making things seem sad
They broke my head they broke my mind
What was in front
Is now behind
You can leave
But you can never go away
I hate these words of sorrow
Leaving me to feel this way
I hate these words of sorrow
They stole my yesterday
Broken tears from broken eyes
Broken tongues tell broken lies
I don’t know but I’ve been told
What’s good is bad, what’s new is old
Mixed confusion toils with hate
I can’t slow down and can’t think strait
I hate these words of sorrow
Leaving me to feel this way
I hate these words of sorrow
They stole my yesterday
Images fall from the sky
For everything that’s born something dies
I’ve thought of good, I’ve thought of bad
I’ll never know what I’ve never had
You ride on a dream fueled by your will
You’ll keep riding along but won’t get your fill
I’ve know criminals and I’ve known queens
I’ve kept my mind dirty but kept my hands clean
I’ll tell you now that that is the key
Try it yourself if you don’t believe me
I hate these words of sorrow
Leaving me to feel this way
I hate these words of sorrow
They stole my yesterday
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Old 07-15-2007, 12:43 PM   #2
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kinda emo-ish.
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Old 07-17-2007, 02:14 AM   #3
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Ah, Kaytea - say something constructive or just shut the hell up. Either one will do.

Crimsonflame - I liked it. It's actually NOT emo, if anything it's anti-emo. One thing I'll suggest is separating the lines to make it obvious where the chorus etc is.
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