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Old 07-12-2007, 08:18 AM   #1
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I Bury Her Deeper

The emotions flowing from these strings
Will burn my throat when I sing
But as time goes by
Her memory will wither and die

And she doesn't know
But my life goes on
And as the time passes
I only bury her deeper
And she doesn't know
But I get along fine
Burying her deeper everyday!

And she doesn't know
But my life goes on
And as the time passes
I only bury her deeper
And she doesn't know
But I get along fine
And, oh, I bury her deeper

So now that she's gone
I'll move on
And let it all die
As time goes by

And when it's lost to time
I'll be fine
Knowing she's buried
Deep in my mind

And she doesn't know
But my life goes on
And as the time passes
I only bury her deeper
And she doesn't know
But I get along fine
Burying her deeper everyday.
And, oh, I bury her deeper!

And I don't want to hold on
To that baleful tone
So as time goes by
I'll bury her deeper
And hope that she dies.

Chorus Variations
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Old 07-12-2007, 11:07 AM   #2
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alot of repitition..but besides that, its pretty good... (Y)
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Well, it's supposed to be a rock song and song's in general do tend to use the chorus to fill in time and make a short song longer. Least ways the songs I listen to do. ^^;
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Old 07-12-2007, 11:06 PM   #4
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The repetition reminds of Modest Mouse's Dashboard. But maybe thats only because it came up on my playlist while reading the song... Its not bad, except the last line "And I hope she dies" is a little bit angsty for being a song about moving on with your life.
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Actually it's not about moving on. It's about repression because that's what I do to things I don't like. I bury them deep in my mind and pretend they don't bother me anymore but deep inside they really do. o__O Maybe I should have called it Repression.
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It's about repression because that's what I do to things I don't like.
Heh, i guess i never really thought of that.
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