Elipsis

This is the first song that i've written in a while so tell if its good or not. Its about how i only have 13 more months of living with my horrible parents until i go to live with my girlfriend and i can finally find peace.

13 More Months at Sea



I’m out in the open water
I’m lost and I’m adrift
You’re the waves and the crashing thunder
I gave into your hiss

The serpent had told me
That I had done wrong
But the doves had landed beside me
And warned me “Hold on”

And now I just wait
And hope to survive
13 months aboard a ship
With a hole in the side

But lady hold on
I’ll be there in time
I won’t let the serpent take yours
Like the serpent took mine

I’m sailing along
So save me a place
I’m leaving the water
Just to see your face

And now I just wait
And hope to survive
13 months aboard a ship
Just waiting to capsize

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