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Old 06-21-2007, 01:30 PM   #1
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song- nothing but a shadow

Nothing but a Shadow
June 17, 2007

Frozen in time,
Yet the world keeps twisting
Logical thoughts to dust
Deceived and perceived
By this transcended reality
Nothing but a shadow

In the blackness of the minds heart

Souls so close yet so far away
Ring church bells where cemeteries lay
One buried with a mind in his hands
Deep with in the shadows gaze

Frozen in time,
Yet the world keeps twisting
Logical thoughts to dust
Deceived and perceived
By this transcended reality
Nothing but a shadow

In the blackness of the minds heart

Nothing but a shadow let in the dirt
Covered by granite in moonlight's way
Nothing but a shadow left in those bones
Covered by the undead in moonlights way

Frozen in time,
Yet the world keeps twisting
Logical thoughts to dust
Deceived and perceived
By this transcended reality
Nothing but a shadow

In the blackness of the minds heart

Souls rust to dust, nothing but a shadow
Souls rust to dust, nothing but a shadow

italics are for the screaming part... it's a metal song...
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Old 06-23-2007, 11:32 AM   #2
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good job, I personally don't like screaming. But the words themselves were full of images and meaning.
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