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Old 03-29-2007, 10:22 PM   #1
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We are jolly green giants, walking the Earth with guns

How coarse is the atmosphere here
Minds in dredges by the sciences of fear
I'd like to think clear
But I'm a drunk driver
Who forgot how to steer
So hand me another beer
One for every day of the year
till I'm permanently intoxicated,
irreversably inebriated,
gradually, inevitably
enthusiastically asphyxiated.

Taking in hallucinogens
With every breath of oxygen
I used to sin like a champion
I used to think Precambrian
I never imagined
Id come out
Just another Choking Victim.

Paralysis is a cloudy feeling
We're doing all the seeing
Without the believing
Because when you take what you see
As what it appears to be
Who's to say whats real
Your are eyes are useless to me,
as they are to we.
Its an unfortunate reality
The consequence of symmetry
a textbook case
of mass youth senility.

And if you were here now
You'd see what it means to me
You'd join the anarchy
And by God you'd finally breathe

This government's institution
Is long out of solutions
See what they pass for education
As mental prostitution
The ideal state of confusion
fucking with your reception
puts askew your depth perception
and turns you blind,
to their disguise, their deception.
I wouldn't wait for an election,
we don't have a candidate
This is the time to renovate
and let our voices resonate.
Don't rush the gate,
tread light and infiltrate
Take both lock and key
Then listen for me
And when the time is right
We'll take our escape.

And if you were here now
You'd see what it means to me
You'd join the anarchy
And by god you'd finally breathe

And if you were here now
You'd know exactly what I mean
You'd burn with me,
But by god you'd finally see.
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Old 04-10-2007, 06:41 PM   #2
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Old 04-11-2007, 11:14 PM   #3
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Youve got some really excellent concepts in here. I like a lot.

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But I'm a drunk driver
Who forgot how to steer
So hand me another beer
Very cool. I kinda feel like the "who forgot how to steer" line is kinda unneccessary though. Like I think it would be cooler as "But Im a drunk driver, so hand me another beer!"

<edit> still though, on second thought, I think this could prob still use some polish. Just give it some really critical editing.

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Old 04-12-2007, 01:07 AM   #4
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That is some fresh lines, get that out to the public soon!
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Old 04-12-2007, 04:34 PM   #5
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This isn't half bad, I like it.
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