T.W. North

Note: I know this is kinda cliche, but ignore that. Alot of stuff is cliche, and this isn't THAT bad.

I'm loving every moment of my time with you
I'm loving every day I spend near you
But it's not enough to talk away the hours
So stay a little and make my day

I can stand and stare
And you'll know
We're just good friends

You're close, but not enough
To make my day something more
Something worth living for
Come closer please

Don't you recall every moment of our past together
Don't you recall every day we spent together
But it's not enough for you to go back again
The past is forgotten now

You can sit and look away
And I'll know
We're just good friends

You're close, but not enough
To make my day something more
Something worth living for
Come closer please
Come closer please

Time is no friend of mine
'Cause things won't work out
And it's my fault
That I grieve and you don't

I just stand and stare
As the world falls down
On my head
You sit and look away
And I know
We're just good friends

You're so close, but not enough
To make my day something more
Something worth living for
Come closer please
Come closer please
Come closer please

twitch

i absolutly love it. i like all of your songs but this one just caught my eye.
I did have one problem, It was the following line:

As the world falls down
On my head

That just doesnt work for me, i dont know why it just doesnt.

T.W. North

Yeah, I noticed that as I wrote, besides the fact that the line doesn't really fit in the song either, it doesn't have the same flow as the rest of it...I'll change it soon.