ChrisAllen

Chorus
She has scarlet eyes when she cries
The tears fall down from her face
When she thinks of the memories she can’t erase
And all the hatred and lies

Verse 1
She feels there’s no one out there for her to hold
No one to make her feel warm when it’s cold
Not a man that can understand
How to make her feel grand

Verse 2
So she lets the tear drops pour like the rain outside
Down into the ground where she feels she belongs
Where nothing else can go wrong
And the world as she knows it will be gone

Chorus

Verse 3
There will come a time when her tears will dry
She’ll no longer wonder why
She met a guy that caused her pain
And another that made her go insane

Verse 4
That time will come when she dies
When we can meet in heaven again
And all her troubles will come to an end
But until then

She’ll have scarlet eyes when she cries
The tears will fall from her face
When she thinks of the memories she can’t erase
And dreams she’s with me in Gods place

Bika

I thought this was a little boring, in terms of language and imagery. I like the idea behind it, but the execution is a little lacking. Some of the rhymes sound a little forced (pain/insane - the insane line is the most awkward for me).

Looking forward to an edit.

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