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Old 02-18-2007, 05:43 PM   #1
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Turn Back Time

Don't say anymore after wish
Cause it's tarnished
And I don't see a lamp

Don't say anymore after if
Cause you're guessing
And I don't like to guess

Don't say anymore after should've
Cause you didn't
And we can't turn back time

We can't turn back time
No, we can't turn back time

I can't turn back time
Can you help me turn back time
Let me turn back time
I need to turn back time

Here comes a second
I'll never see again
Now it has passed me
And many other men

I tried to chase it
But it fly’s much too fast
Those who are dying
Won't ever catch the past

Our world is spinning
The Sun don't ever move
The flowing waters
Stretching a tiny groove

The door is bolted
Who's gonna ring the chime
If no one answers
We can't turn back the time

We can't turn back the time
No, we can't turn back time

I can't turn back time
Can you help me turn back time
Let me turn back time
I need to turn back time

You think it's hidden
Or was it thrown away
Will someone find it
Or were they led astray

Don't think I'm selfish
Something should be changed
It's impossible
The mind is still deranged

Can you be content
Not ever looking back
How painful is it
When memories attack

Now that's it over
I cry myself to sleep
I want it different
But time will always creep

We can't turn back the time
No, we can't turn back time

I can't turn back time
Can you help me turn back time
Let me turn back time
I need to turn back time
Please help me turn back time



I think this song should start off as a slow acoustic for the first three verses, then build up over the next two lines, then explode into the chorus. If someone can put this to music, even if it's different than what I have in mind, please do and let me know. thanks

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