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Old 01-13-2007, 01:34 PM   #1
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Stalking the Wingless Angel

Another beauty just walked in here
I need someone like you to survive
Nothing on this world compares my dear
When you're in this room I feel so alive

Like a drug addict
You can predict
There gonna contradict
To get to it
I think I need it back
To keep me on track
To see in pitch black
I think I need her back

Like a drug addict
You can predict
There gonna contradict
To get to it
I think I need it back
To keep me on track
To see in pitch black
I know I need her back

Where I have been and you have only dreamt of
I saw the sight that you said looks like love
It looks at you and disappears
An allusive creature that takes with it your fears

I don't take love or lust back home with me
To go to her instead of her following
Just have to wait till' I can get in
I can't think of what to say my words I'm swallowing

I guess I have to say I need to see
The closer I get the less I can talk
All I do is smile and she smiles at me

You promised me
You'd let me see
So keep that true
And I'll stay with you

I don't think I prefer you over her
I know what you want and you want a reason
So find it on your own, good bye sir
It's worth it, it's worth a bit of treason

I know where through but can you ask her
For me
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Old 01-13-2007, 05:22 PM   #2
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i enjoyed it i just had a problem getting through this...

Like a drug addict
You can predict
There gonna contradict
To get to it
I think I need it back
To keep me on track
To see in pitch black
I know I need her back

i felt throughout it it needed a slightly longer lyric in the middle of that but just my opinion well done keep um coming!!
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