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01-05-2007, 11:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Vulgar`
This wasn't humorous to me because I've been around rap writing for a long time. It serves it's purpose. Just don't get too serious with producing anymore of these. Back to your daily program.
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I think the whole purpose of doing this one was just to do it. Not make an entire portfolio out of it. But still, there is plenty of rap out there that the listener isn't supposed to take seriously. In fact, that is often the very reason why people listen to it.
Rap, rock, classical or country. It's all expression, in most cases, to be done for the pleasure of the author first and foremost. |
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01-05-2007, 11:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Vulgar`
This wasn't humorous to me because I've been around rap writing for a long time. It serves it's purpose. Just don't get too serious with producing anymore of these. Back to your daily program.
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Two words for you:
Fifty Cent.
Yeah, there are brilliant guys out there like Canibus or Immortal Technique, but there aren't many of them. |
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01-06-2007, 04:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Jolly McJollyson
Yeah, there are brilliant guys out there like Canibus or Immortal Technique, but there aren't many of them.
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Lets all hate on LL, Coz 99% percent of his fans can't spell... |
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01-06-2007, 02:29 PM
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Aesop Rock?
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01-06-2007, 02:46 PM
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Aesop Rock?
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Another good one. Common and Mos Def as well, though neither is Immortal Technique good.
Papoose is interesting as well, and of course a few members of the Wu Tang Clan. Method Man especially. |
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01-06-2007, 02:48 PM
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This song was mostly a shot at rappers like Jay-Z who are more businessmen than poets or artists.
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01-13-2007, 01:59 PM
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Do you understand Aesop Rock's lyrics? This was too playful to be a diss - for a diss to be real, it has to skim along the rhythmic realism. This didn't. Write a strictly hardened rap diss and it's business.
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01-17-2007, 07:32 PM
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being partially robotic, I have to say this is awesome.
On another scale, it's hilarious. Thanks for pointing out the corporation thought.
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02-10-2007, 03:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Vulgar`
This was too playful to be a diss - for a diss to be real, it has to skim along the rhythmic realism. This didn't. Write a strictly hardened rap diss and it's business.
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I think you may have missed the point. This isn't a "diss." It's a parody and a satire. |
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02-15-2007, 09:29 PM
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And it makes excellent satire. By the way, would I be wrong in guessing that one of your inspirations was Deltron?
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02-15-2007, 09:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Edgewise
And it makes excellent satire. By the way, would I be wrong in guessing that one of your inspirations was Deltron?
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Actually, the majority of the style came from Method Man. |
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02-16-2007, 11:03 AM
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Robot please!!!!!!
(I love this.)
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