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12-04-2006, 10:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
To some extent, I ment that the poetic influence cut too deep into the AC/DC-ish feel it gets near the end, its like they were written for different things then molded together.
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ah, sorry for the confusion, I thought you meant in general. |
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12-04-2006, 12:44 PM
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Writing Machine
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Originally Posted by Mystery
To some extent, I ment that the poetic influence cut too deep into the AC/DC-ish feel it gets near the end, its like they were written for different things then molded together.
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That's the beauty of punk-you can do that.  |
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12-04-2006, 02:02 PM
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I didn't think of it as punk  maybe just because all my punk lyrics end up being comical.  |
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12-04-2006, 02:21 PM
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Well notice the title 'Our Stars Shine So Beautifully'-stars refering to the music stars of punk. I was trying to symbolize the life and darkness of the older and some modern punk stars.
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12-04-2006, 02:28 PM
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ah, I kinda just took the first person in stride.
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12-04-2006, 02:40 PM
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Yah, I thought it work good as first person to portray the emotion better. It may very well be better in third though.
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12-04-2006, 02:46 PM
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no, I liked it in the first person. I just dont tend to anylyze poems or lyrics for meaning, as it is not my style.
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12-04-2006, 02:53 PM
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Okay good, I didn't want to change it lol.
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