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Old 12-02-2006, 04:24 PM   #1
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Forest friends
The trees…
They be tall
Except for the fact that they don’t exist
These be the crazy woods you know…
Some go in…
All come back out
Claiming there were trees
There aren’t no trees
Just forest friends
Like my buddy big bear
And Mr.Fox
They are crazy that way, you know
The "I’m crazy" sort of way
The woods be…
Crazy
Crazy
Crazy
Duck!
Crazy
Crazy
Crazy
Moose!
Crazy
Crazy
Crazy
Woods!
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Old 12-02-2006, 04:41 PM   #2
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An interesting peice. I have definantly never seen a style so, eccentric. I would like to say it would have been cooler if you said duck-duck-goose instead of duck-moose-woods in that last bit. Either way though, it was an interestingly and likable peice.
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Old 12-03-2006, 07:48 AM   #3
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It certainly made me laugh!

You gotta be Cornish talking like that!

There be bears in them there woods!

More, more, more.
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Old 12-03-2006, 09:00 AM   #4
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you, my friend, are crazy. But I liked it.
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HA! I'm just imagining the crazy crazy crazy part. Where right after the three crazies, the music stops for a second and then you yell "DUCK!" "MOOSE!" or "WOODS!"
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What can I say? I love it.
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