I call to you - Writers Forum

Featherlightheart · 12-02-2006, 06:43 AM

This is the best song i have ver writen so i hope you like it:

I call to you

I call to you my fallen star,
I may mean only darkness,
But remeber who you are,
As the wind calls our freedom,
We arent so very far,
Away from our destiny.

(chorus)
These words the wind whisper,
Do you hear?
Fate, our writen book,
Destiny, to future look,
Freedom, for us was took,
Our future in the air,
Do you hear?

I call to you my hidden love,
That you may hear my prayers,
Sent to you high above,
The ocean in its endless beauty,
With the peace of a dove,
Sent from our fate.

(chorus)

I call to you my lost dream,
My memory may be long forgotten,
But follow our lifestream,
Youll soon find me in a pool of tears,
My loss of life has lost its theme,
Cast away from out freedom.

thamior · 12-02-2006, 11:30 AM

This was a good lyric, I'm glad you posted it. A bit overwhelmed with the mass of lyrics that showed up

. But if this is any indicator then I'll be very pleased, I enjoyed it alot.

Featherlightheart · 12-02-2006, 12:30 PM

Thanks that makes me feel better, its nice to know someone appreciates my work!

thamior · 12-02-2006, 12:55 PM

Indeed, there were so many lyrics today though, it was very intimidating, and of course all of mine have been pushed to the bottom or the next page.

Featherlightheart · 12-04-2006, 10:36 AM

ahhh, i hate it when that happens, i shall have a look at some of your threads if i can!