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Old 12-02-2006, 01:03 AM   #1
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"The sky is falling"

Stop and think
Young man with blood gushing out of his neck
Then say, "Awe fuck the rest."
But then the story changes
The blood
Turns into
A rainbow-which is magic
Then the doctor shoots mystical laser beams out of his eyes
Which light up our spirits
I think it’s sad
How you aren’t so
Cool with
The program
I guess I’ll have to learn to get along
With the mother fucking rainbow
Creeping out, from your neck
The colors
Hurt my eyes
From the rain, the acid rain
Coming from your rainbow
Attached to your neck
Feeding on the colors in you
Feeding
Until you’re gray
Like a celluloid picture
The lasers from your eyes
Your wonderful red eyes
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Old 12-02-2006, 11:32 AM   #2
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It's a bit odd but it does have flow. Aw instead of Awe.
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