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Old 10-18-2006, 12:14 AM   #1
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Song - When Did I Lose Me?

A summation of all my poems and feelings tonight...

I looked in a mirror one night,
to see what was staring back.
Holding to an image felt right,
but holding mine caused it to crack.

Chorus:
How did the smile disappear,
and when did I leave?
When did I lose to my fear,
when did I lose me?

I thought that I breathed the truth,
but I was pushing it away.
I liked to think that I grew,
but it was just a touch of gray.

Bridge:
Am I the person staring back at me,
its always asked-but oh it feels so true.
Am I the person I thought I'd be,
I used to think that I really knew.

*Chorus*

Why can't I touch the otherside,
it feels like I should know whats me.
But if I don't know my mind,
how can I believe what I see.

*ChourS*

I'm so confused it hurts so deep,
this angst and pain never belonged.
I'm just another broken heap,
that died in wishing for all I longed.

*Chorus*
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Old 10-18-2006, 10:11 PM   #2
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it was going well, until that last verse. but that's just my taste.
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Old 10-18-2006, 10:14 PM   #3
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what dont you like about the last verse?
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