hey, another lyric

, once again just remember, if you want a crit, just PM, I have so many things going on that its hard to sort through everything.
I stand alone in my world of ruin,
torn apart by our human fear.
And looking on what I have been,
I wonder why it is I am here.
I've felt tears run down my cheeks,
as hope slips into surrounding night.
With no flower rushes at my feet,
you wonder if you'll see dawn's clear light.
Chorus:
And I've burned all the thoughts on my mind,
trashed the only heart I have inside.
But destiny lends me hope anew,
in God I think I've found whats true.
Like a rose petal falling down,
carried on the wind in suspense.
I was slowly losing ground,
wondering where my time had went.
Dew drops rolled on the blades of grass,
and I yearned to feel their coolness touch.
Haunted by the wounds in my past,
limping along on life's sorry crutch.
*chorus*
I've seen a crow in black waiting,
nothing but a shadow passing by.
A void to fill-with death he's playing,
I heard the chilling shrill of his cry.
I walk this road but not alone,
my feet pound the dirt that will always be.
Praising tmy life thats been reshone,
I ask God to take this life and guide me.
*Chorus*
One day all things will fade away,
the rose will be taken back.
When nothingness pervades the day,
all those whom He knows will fulfill His pact.
*chorus* x2