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Old 08-11-2006, 05:21 AM   #1
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Вот постепенно набирая ход,
Бежит по рельсам маленький трамвайчик.
Вагон пустой. Лишь одинокий мальчик
Сидит в углу, глаза полны забот.

Глаза полны и грусти, и тоски
Все смотрит из окна он на прохожих
Как будто отыскать никак не может
Людей что он оставил позади.

Всех тех, что был когда-то ему рад:
И братьев, и сестер, и папу с мамой.
Теперь один он бродит по вокзалам,
Гуляет по помокам... Грязь и смрад.

И каждый месяц, он, купив билет
Все ездит здесь на стареньком трамвае
И по дороге горько вспоминает
Все радости давно пропавших лет...

Уже не мальчик, он уже высок.
Он вырос хоть не ростом, так судьбою,
И жизнь прожил он в постоянном бое
Когда один ушел он за порог.

И постепенно исчезая в даль,
Трамвайчик доезжает до конечной.
В вагоне мальчик тихо, и безречно
Сидит в углу. В глазах его печаль.




PS: Yes. It's Russian. I know.
I don't even know how to justify that.
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Old 08-11-2006, 07:20 AM   #2
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I let my wife read this. She says it reminds her of the homeless kids living at Moscow's railroad terminals.

She read this out to me, in that sing-song of the Moscow Russian, which added to your poem's esthetic drama. Truly poignant.
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Old 08-11-2006, 08:19 AM   #3
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Could you post an english version please?
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Old 08-11-2006, 03:05 PM   #4
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