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Old 08-10-2006, 12:34 PM   #1
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Nothin' Blues

Well, I've had a lot of ladies,
and I've loved a few
but none of them made me feel like
sayin' "I do"
I got those nothin' blues,
got those, nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
and I ain't got nothin' to lose.

Well there's thousands of girls to give me lovin',
But not one who can give me love
I'm lookin' for a girl who'll make me think
she was sent from up above,
But I got those, nothin' blues,
Those damn nothin' blues.
And I don't think that she's out there,
So I ain't got much to lose.

There's plenty of nice girls around me,
and plenty of drunken whores,
but all I'm really tryin' to find
is some sweet sweet a'mor.
But I got those, nothin' blues
Those empty nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
And I ain't got nothin' to lose.

Just lookin' for a nice girl,
to help me shed these blues
If I ever get to meet her,
this nothin's what I'll lose.
But I got those nothin' blues,
those cold, nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
Ain't got nothin' to lose.
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Old 08-10-2006, 11:40 PM   #2
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Nice work, like it, lots. Got music for it?
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Old 08-11-2006, 01:07 PM   #3
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the music is the basic harmonica blues song, a line then a bit of harmonica, etc., which i can play when i'm drunk
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Old 08-11-2006, 01:46 PM   #4
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see what you think of this slant:



Well, I've had a lot of ladies,
and I've loved MORE'N A few
but none of them made me feel like
sayin' "I do"
I got I DO nothin' blues,
got I DO nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
SO I ain't got nothin' to lose.

Well there's thousands of girls 'AT give me lovin',
But not one who WHAT give me love
I'm lookin' for a girl who'll make me BELEIVE
she was sent from up above,
But I got I DO nothin' blues,
Those damn DO nothin' blues.
And I don't think that she's out there,
SO I ain't got much to lose.

There's plenty of nice girls around me,
and plenty of drunken whores,
but all I'm really tryin' to find
is some sweet sweet a'mor.
But I got I DO nothin' blues
Those empty DO nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
And I ain't got nothin' to lose.

Just lookin' for a nice girl,
to help me shed these blues
If I ever get to meet her,
THERE'S nothin's what I'll lose.
But I got I DO nothin' blues,
those cold, nothin' blues.
Ain't got nothin' to go for,
Ain't got nothin' to lose.[/quote]
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Old 08-11-2006, 02:28 PM   #5
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haha i like "believe" instead of think, but i'm going to keep it as just "nothin blues" because i really like the sound of that
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