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08-10-2006, 12:26 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Apr 2006
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Short Mr Pot meet Sweet Mr Kettle
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Last edited by Bika : 10-15-2006 at 07:29 PM.
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08-10-2006, 12:34 AM
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Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Not over there, that's for sure....
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ellipsis... mystery... demon
I'm glad you mentioned so many members...
The lyrics were cool.
Nice metaphor.
D|E|M|O|N
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08-10-2006, 12:53 AM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Quote:
there's no mystery to your demons
nothing in your cynical written leavings
empty words and hollow boasts
toothless bite of a hot-air ghost
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Dare I say genius? Great one Bika, a WF classic....
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"I beg to dream and differ from the hollow lies...."
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08-10-2006, 01:22 AM
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Writing Machine
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Too bad I don't rate anymore...
[9/10]
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08-10-2006, 04:46 PM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Ohio.. blehhhh
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that first verse is killer, great job
second verse is good
i don't understand "bovine kind"
brothers of the cow kind? what does that mean?
and besides that it feel like it could use one more verse after the bridge.
great work
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08-10-2006, 05:01 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Carribean
Gender: Male
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Quote:
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Originally Posted by ebmadman
Dare I say genius? Great one Bika, a WF classic....
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Can't take it can you 
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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