Welcome to Writing Forums, one of the fastest growing writing communties on the web.
You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions, articles and photo galleries. By joining our free community you will
be able to talk with other writers, get feedback on your work to improve your writing skills, discuss ideas, share tips & tricks, network and make friends!
Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!
If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.
| Lyrics Original Song Lyrics. |
08-09-2006, 11:59 PM
|
#16
|
|
Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Not over there, that's for sure....
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,783
|
Yes, Manda, that's brilliant.
See, I picked you a good fictional character.
__________________
Nowhuttumsayen?
click on the spoiler for YOUR health...
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:00 AM
|
#17
|
|
Ink Slinger
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,358
|
The rhyme is pretty good in my opinion too
__________________
Every artist is a cannibal; Every poet is a thief All kill the inspiration; and sing about the grief - U2
Say what you mean, and mean what you say.
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:00 AM
|
#18
|
|
Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: wherever I wish it to be
Gender: Male
Posts: 8,487
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by mandax
I said I liked the rhyme, not necessarily the two lines together. I haven't seen "cancer" and "answer" paired in a long time.
Demon, maybe changing "wall" to "mirror" would help? Just a suggestion.
|
well the damn is what killed it for me line-wise...
but just because you havent seen a rhyme in awhile doent make it good...a rhyme is either good or it isnt... |
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:00 AM
|
#19
|
|
Profound Writer
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,302
|
Haha, glad you agree. ^^
I wouldn't know, since I never have watched "The 'L' Word". =P
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:01 AM
|
#20
|
|
Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: wherever I wish it to be
Gender: Male
Posts: 8,487
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Bika
The rhyme is pretty good in my opinion too
|
 I was joking, but you dont get an opinion either...you will listne to me *laughs* |
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:01 AM
|
#21
|
|
Profound Writer
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,302
|
Tham, relax! I am entitled to my opinion. Thanks for the support, Bika. See? Some people just see things differently. It's no big deal.
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:02 AM
|
#22
|
|
Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Not over there, that's for sure....
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,783
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by thamior
well the damn is what killed it for me line-wise...
but just because you havent seen a rhyme in awhile doent make it good...a rhyme is either good or it isnt...
|
Lol, I'm sorry if I triggered something, lol.
I totallly agree with your opinion. Everybody has their opinions. The rhyme isn't why I put it their, I would have put virus, but cnacer affects lives in a much more bitter way, dude. I erased the stanze above it and put answer from conclusion (that and conclusion would have effed the whole song).
For once, it's nice to get some true disagreement upon my stuff.
Manda, you should.
__________________
Nowhuttumsayen?
click on the spoiler for YOUR health...
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:05 AM
|
#23
|
|
Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: wherever I wish it to be
Gender: Male
Posts: 8,487
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by mandax
Tham, relax! I am entitled to my opinion. Thanks for the support, Bika. See? Some people just see things differently. It's no big deal.
|
I already said you dont get an opinion...you people dont listen 
good night all...I'm really grouchy right now (Cant you tell  ) but while Idont like the line or the rhyme for that one part....I WAS JUST KIDDING....calm down to you.... |
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:07 AM
|
#24
|
|
Profound Writer
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,302
|
K, Tham. Didn't mean to start anything. G'night!
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:09 AM
|
#25
|
|
Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Not over there, that's for sure....
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,783
|
G'night....
See you tommorow....
I'm going to harass you on MSN tommorow
__________________
Nowhuttumsayen?
click on the spoiler for YOUR health...
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:11 AM
|
#26
|
|
Profound Writer
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,302
|
*stops spamming Demon's thread*
My apologies.
|
|
|
|
|
08-10-2006, 12:12 AM
|
#27
|
|
Writing Machine
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Not over there, that's for sure....
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,783
|
*demon luaghs at it all*
__________________
Nowhuttumsayen?
click on the spoiler for YOUR health...
|
|
|
|
|
Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
|
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 03:48 AM. Powered by vBulletin, Copyright ©2000-2007, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0
|
|
Newsletter |
 |
|
Subscribe to Majestic
the official newsletter of Writing Forums and lit.org
|
|
Link to Us: 
|
|
