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Old 08-05-2006, 10:14 PM   #1
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If You Take It.

If You Take It
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If you take it, will you take it wrong?
If you run, will you go in the right direction?
Cause there's alot of kids living on the streets.
If you take it, will it be enough to eat?

"Can you spare some change?" said a kid at a show.
I gave him what I had, so he could get home.
When you got nothing in your pockets, and your sleeping on the ground.
It takes alot to get back up, when you've been kicked down.

But if you're running, I'll run with you.
And if you take it, I'll take it too.
And if you're down, I'll get you back on your feet.
Cause a little bit, is all we need.

They say there's opportunity in the land of the free.
But I've seen that it only comes to those with the money.
So if you take it, how long will it last?
Cause now-a-days things seem to be running out fast.

A man said "Your generation provides a better future for us all."
But the only future I see is plagued with hate filled bombs.
We can't end racism or help the homeless or the poor.
But we sure know know to kick a man when he's already down on the floor.

But if you're running, I'll run with you.
And if you take it, I'll take it too.
And if you're down, I'll get you back on your feet.
Cause a little bit, is all we need.
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Old 08-06-2006, 06:49 PM   #2
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there were highlights in this like:
It takes alot to get back up, when you've been kicked down.

We can't end racism or help the homeless or the poor.
But we sure know know to kick a man when he's already down on the floor.

but it was very wordy and seemed to lack a good, or consistent flow, still overall I liked it, with the exception of the first verse.
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Old 08-09-2006, 06:03 AM   #3
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This was mean to tell a story right?

It did. Congradualtions.... but I just can't find a flow.

Nice.

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Old 08-10-2006, 06:34 PM   #4
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this is fantastic, dylanesque, really well done. i caught the flow, it's there, just takes a while to find.
the one and only thing is "plagued with hate-filled bombs" that line is overly done and doesn't fit

besides that it's incredible
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Old 08-10-2006, 07:57 PM   #5
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Good stuff. Keep it up.
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