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A Love Song (aka Would you like some corn with that?) A Love Song (aka Would you like some corn with that?)
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Old 08-03-2006, 07:46 AM   #1
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I know this would sound great if put to music. The last four lines make a good ending.
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Even though this is cliche, it somehow works? Wow, congrats, because that's certainly an accomplishment. I was a little worried when I saw "flutterfly" but hey, I got over it. I really liked the flow of the first stanza, by the way. I think it's the best one.
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