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Old 07-26-2006, 10:44 PM   #1
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The Fun Places

Climb from the tallest tower.
Find the thinnest window ledge.
Slide across the slickest roof.
Find the raindrenched alley.

(chorus)
They say the most beautiful creations,
Are in the darkest places.
Enjoy these playgrounds,
Before the day.

Climb the rickity tree.
Explore the haunted house.
Crawl into the darkest cave.
Play on the roof.

(chorus)

You'll find these places...
All these places...
Everyday or your life.
Take some time as they say,
And smel the roses.
Before it's too late,
To enjoy.

(chorus)
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Old 07-26-2006, 11:18 PM   #2
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I liked the meaning alot, but the flow was broken alot throughout the song.
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Climb the rickity tree.
Explore the haunted house.
Crawl into the darkest cave.
Play on the roof.
That one line seemed to mess the whole verse up. Maybe if it had an adjective before "Roof", then it might sound better.

I would be very intersted to hear what you had in mind while writing this. What type of music are you planning on putting it to? -im always thinking in an acoustic state of mind
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Old 07-26-2006, 11:37 PM   #3
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I was thinking acoustic.
Truthfully, I wish I could sing and I wish I had a microphone on the computer.
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