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Old 07-24-2006, 02:01 PM   #1
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Dont Know

Dont know
By Rachel (Curse)

I don’t know where I’m going
I don’t know how I’m getting there
Today is that day
That I leave for good

Never look back
Cause there’s nothing that way

I’m traveling down the highway to hell
Don’t wanna look back
A mystery behind every turn
And truth that just won’t let up

Follow your dreams
Travel to the ends of the earth
See what you always had
That goddamn truth

That goddamn truth…

Today was the day
I left and threw it all away

Cause I followed my dreams
And I traveled to the ends of the earth
And I saw what I missed

I saw what I missed…

Don’t know where I’m going
Don’t care how I get there
I know I know that I should

Come back home

Alrighty well its monday again and iv decided instead of a poem i would write a song. Tell me what you think ^.^
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Brilliant! Not an original theme, but well expressed, emotive, and unforced. Did you have any kind of music in mind for it?
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Old 07-25-2006, 11:55 AM   #3
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yea i was acctually singing it an it sounds so great >.< my voice isnt a car wreck so i was able to get an idea of how i want it to sound.

Im computer estupid so i dont know how to get my voice on here either
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it's really strange, but it sort of reminds me of Norah Jones' "Don't know", possibly because of the title, but i could also see the words sort of fitting to the music.

good job
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