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Old 07-20-2006, 02:44 PM   #1
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Alright all you lyric writers out there! I just got a new guitar and decided to record some free-style. Just for a little fun, try and write some lyrics for this piece and i guess ill try and choose the best one =D> It can be about anything so go for it! Here is the LINK for the music. (its pretty simple)
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EDIT: and yes, it does have a rough ending but if that little accident didn't happen, it never would have ended!
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Old 07-20-2006, 09:45 PM   #2
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an intoxicating melody, Sir.

Try these words on for size:


All the New Hurt
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A big banyon tree grows down
Into all the black dirt…and the
Vines... become the new trees, they’re
Spreading.... all the new hurt

Because... newness always burns all
Those unprepared for.... the
Things they never knew before
They grew up in the new world

I can’t take ....all the new hurt
I dug ....enough of the old dirt
To unearth.... all of the old world
But no one seems to be worth
The effort……….

A big banyon tree grows down
Into all the black dirt…and the
Vines ....become the new trees, they’re
Spreading all the new hurt

Screw all the old people
In this new world
Trying to hurt the new me
When I’m just being true to
All that should be free

Free all the old me’s and
Love all the new me’s...and
Be ...all that you can be
And see all that you can see

Because

It time to be all you can be
It’s time be what you can see
It’s time for you to be free
Any time that you can see
All that you can ever be

A big banyon tree grows down
Into all the black dirt…and the
Vines ....become the new trees, they’re
Spreading all the new hurt
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Old 07-20-2006, 10:54 PM   #3
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thank you, pretty good but im still trying to fit it to the music. can you give me the start time and end time of the first verse? this would help me estimate how fast the lyrics would be sung
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welll....there ain;t no timer on your link ....so
i dunno....it's sung pretty slow...lots of pauses. gotta git to bed. talk at you tomorrow.
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Old 07-23-2006, 08:52 PM   #5
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well.... i guess your the winner lol
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