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Old 07-25-2006, 07:37 PM   #16
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You're too concerned with your loss of inspiration. It's becoming self-perpetuating.
Make the observation on your own threads, thanks.
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:48 PM   #17
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If you can make sense of this... well done
Arrange verses/chorus as you see fit.

<chorus>
out of the dark night, astride naught but flames
a clatter and a scream that breach heaven's high range
down the cobblestoned road, down the endless pathway
to vanish, devoured by the gloom and rage

<verse>
someone will die tonight, someone will cry
another will fly tonight, one more will sigh
and the flames will burn on, foot marks in time
we leave the flames; flickering lives

<verse>
the world will burn tonight, the earth will weep
the moon will shine tonight, the stars will sleep
but the flames will burn on, foot marks in time
we start the fires; engulfing lives

<verse>
I will rise tonight, my tears will fall
I will soar tonight, you, you will crawl
and the flames burn on, foot marks in time
tying us together; binding lives
It has a nice tempo and rhymes, but I miss the meaning. then again, I'm not that smart.
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:51 PM   #18
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ta, Vasque
There is no spoon... errr meaning
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:59 PM   #19
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You're too concerned with your loss of inspiration. It's becoming self-perpetuating.
Make the observation on your own threads, thanks.
yea sorry, dont get frustarted, I wasnt meaning to hijack your thread....dam n I did it again...


GREAT LYRIC!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-25-2006, 08:12 PM   #20
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Ha. No spoon LOL
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