evadri

Okay, now I've been sitting here for a substantial amount of time, not knowing how to introduce this lyric. So I'll just post it, and anything you want to know, just ask.

FALLEN FOR THE RAIN

V1
Let me linger please
Oh, let me linger
Cool clouds rolls the keys
Like a blues singer
Slowly shifting shape
Full spectrum of grey
No thought for escape
I want to stay

C
Hand me my coat
I’ve fallen for the rain
Drip, foam and float
I’ve fallen for the rain
It wasn’t long after you came
Til I was falling for the rain

V2
Fire flash, don’t fear
The drops drown the light
Let us linger here
Drenched in blue, grey, white
Pale yellow circle shines
Haloes of delight
Behind cloud vapour fine
Rainbow crystal bright

B
Drip drop, drip drop
The rain is falling down
Drip drop, drip drop
Falling all around
Just you try to
Keep my feet down on the ground

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Bika

Very sweet in its simplicity. Some great images (pale yellow circle shines - nice!)
Only one tiny little bit:
"Til" doesn't sit quite right for me.

Lovely

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evadri

Thanks Bika. (appreciate you having a look, as this kinda slipped away without notice.)

Wouldn't you know it, those two lines are the ones I've agonised over. I'm still not completely sure about them. I think I originally had 'Before I was falling...'

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Bika

"that" maybe?

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