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Vulgar` · 07-14-2006, 01:03 PM

AREA 51: Restricted.

Sandman shift over the bandwidth, careless
Galactic mail man milk man at the door with a land drift
Drought overtakes this water supply I had my hands in
Under the forest bridge with a sandwich, take a photo
Study the stillness of a droplet while the lake is frozen
Alien case decoded - manhood, fathership
The trains in forward.
Make your little attempt at exploring the world,
Area 50.9 the campsite, don't piss in the tent
Bring your goggles, insect spray, start living the scent
Daily rituals, I don't mean religious intent, Buddhism or Zen
When perspiration kicks in, I suggest you visit again
One day you'll understand while things are kept secret
The hurricane came, I kept sleeping
Since I have to wake up at 9' tomorrow I should think harder
5th elements and 10 harbors, work together and tug-a-war snap the tentacle puppet string contraints we need to get farther!
Genetically engineered crocodiles and cannibals, then the crowd runs out
Yea, The hills had eyes before I gouged one out
Room plants and lava lamps, dustless exhaust
Beyond the plexiglass, scientists mumbling thoughts
Bent over the alien corpse, it was brought into sight
It's a cold world when you realize the sunrise is the hospital light
Take a desert sud and deliver on em'
For those trying to get it on in half -
Half of your features covered in mud to contaminate river water
The creature wants us, to say wisdom and get drenched in the rain spectrum
Rookie. Who lied to you and fucked up the terrain system?
Recurrant weather, observant members gather beneath the burning embers

"Like a brick through the window marked Return to Sender" - Gnomes

The new invading species walks up to the mic stand:
"There's 10 steps to becoming an audio champion
Lose the thuggish brawl, and die fighting off aliens
Besides planetary conflicts, 4th of July kicks off with a rant
Be a human martyr, and set a grenade off in your pants

Gnomes Amok · 07-15-2006, 10:41 PM

This is to good, it demands commentation and analysis that I unfortunately dont have the time for at the moment. So Im bumping it for when I will

And Im honored that you mentioned me in here, Vulgar

Gnomes Amok · 07-17-2006, 11:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulgar`

AREA 51: Restricted.

Sandman shift over the bandwidth, careless
Galactic mail man milk man at the door with a land drift
Drought overtakes this water supply I had my hands in
Under the forest bridge with a sandwich, take a photo
Study the stillness of a droplet while the lake is frozen
Alien case decoded - manhood, fathership
The trains in forward.
Make your little attempt at exploring the world,
Area 50.9 the campsite, don't piss in the tent
Bring your goggles, insect spray, start living the scent
Daily rituals, I don't mean religious intent, Buddhism or Zen
When perspiration kicks in, I suggest you visit again
One day you'll understand while things are kept secret
The hurricane came, I kept sleeping
Since I have to wake up at 9' tomorrow I should think harder
5th elements and 10 harbors, work together and tug-a-war snap the tentacle puppet string contraints we need to get farther!
Genetically engineered crocodiles and cannibals, then the crowd runs out
Yea, The hills had eyes before I gouged one out
Room plants and lava lamps, dustless exhaust
Beyond the plexiglass, scientists mumbling thoughts
Bent over the alien corpse, it was brought into sight
It's a cold world when you realize the sunrise is the hospital light
Take a desert sud and deliver on em'
For those trying to get it on in half -
Half of your features covered in mud to contaminate river water
The creature wants us, to say wisdom and get drenched in the rain spectrum
Rookie. Who lied to you and fucked up the terrain system?
Recurrant weather, observant members gather beneath the burning embers

"Like a brick through the window marked Return to Sender" - Gnomes

The new invading species walks up to the mic stand:
"There's 10 steps to becoming an audio champion
Lose the thuggish brawl, and die fighting off aliens
Besides planetary conflicts, 4th of July kicks off with a rant
Be a human martyr, and set a grenade off in your pants

What I love about your work Vulgar is that you possess an ability to play on words that I can only hint at.

"Recurrant weather, observant members gather beneath the burning embers"

Goddamn thats good

"It's a cold world when you realize the sunrise is the hospital light"

This to.

To me, this song is a somber commentary on the state of the public mindset. If Im misinterpreting, consider it a compliment that your lyrics possess such versatility

Id love to hear what this stuff sounds like.

Bika · 07-19-2006, 09:20 PM

Ditto Gnomes, this could sound quite wicked.
I think I'd have to be on drugs to come up with something that might barely come close to resembling stuff like this