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Old 07-12-2006, 08:45 AM   #1
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Old 07-12-2006, 09:10 AM   #2
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Definitely not junk. Too tired to give anything more constructive at the moment, though.
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Lol, as far as the lyrics go, they are as good as that already sold and famous (if you think about it). And although you didn't specify a genre, I pictured the lyrics immediately with my guitar, and they worked. It seemed like a fun thing, no secret meanings or twists ect, and I liked it.

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You'll have that perfect smile on your face
I think this should be 'You'll have that perfect smile upon your face'. Maybe it was the way I imagined the tune, but it seemed to fit better.

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