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07-10-2006, 07:31 PM
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Wordsmith
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Song - Touched by love's caress
Here are the words again,
that I thought I would feel.
Touching them causes pain,
yet I know they wont heal.
from those eyes of crystal blue,
I whisk my mind from thought.
As my feelings work on through,
I wonder why I stop.
Chorus:
and here it does repeat,
I know it it'll be like before.
Lonely I walk the street,
the lights dont shine anymore.
Torture as I'm torn apart,
between bat'ling decision.
Take a stab at my heart,
or give chance to fateful wind.
Softly your smile gleams,
as you wade through my mind.
I cannot end these dreams,
you make everything alright.
*chorus*
and if I'm the teddy bear,
sitting there all alone.
I hope to cuddle and care,
this world has yet been shown.
Hold and tuck me in your heart,
your thought rests upon my breast.
Between us painted the art,
gently touched by love's caress.
*chorus*
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07-10-2006, 07:49 PM
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Ink Slinger
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Same shit, different words.
It's getting very, very, very boring.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 07:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
Same shit, different words.
It's getting very, very, very boring.
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I know, cliche  |
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07-10-2006, 07:50 PM
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Originally Posted by thamior
I know, cliche |
It's not cliche, it's the same shit from the same person just colored in a different way.
If you take a pizza with ham, and add ketchup, it's still a pizza with ham >.>
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 07:51 PM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
It's not cliche, it's the same shit from the same person just colored in a different way.
If you take a pizza with ham, and add ketchup, it's still a pizza with ham >.>
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ah, but this song is different, at least the meaning behind it is. I've never been exactly in this situation before, but I have, its hard to explain. |
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07-10-2006, 07:57 PM
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Originally Posted by thamior
ah, but this song is different, at least the meaning behind it is. I've never been exactly in this situation before, but I have, its hard to explain.
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No it's not, it's ham pizza 
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 08:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
No it's not, it's ham pizza |
i'd have to explain for you to understand, but the song was supposed to do that, apparently it didnt. |
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07-10-2006, 11:03 PM
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Originally Posted by thamior
i'd have to explain for you to understand, but the song was supposed to do that, apparently it didnt.
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There's no point telling people here anything anymore, they just think they know everything and you don't get it.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 11:06 PM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
There's no point telling people here anything anymore, they just think they know everything and you don't get it.
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yea, I meant the song was supposed to explain the situation, and it didnt do it wll...apparently. |
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07-10-2006, 11:25 PM
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Originally Posted by thamior
yea, I meant the song was supposed to explain the situation, and it didnt do it wll...apparently.
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No, you more along the lines of missed what im trying to say.
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 11:28 PM
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Nt
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Every artist is a cannibal; Every poet is a thief All kill the inspiration; and sing about the grief - U2
Say what you mean, and mean what you say.
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07-10-2006, 11:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Mystery
No, you more along the lines of missed what im trying to say.
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well explain. 
and Bika what dos NT stanbd for? |
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07-10-2006, 11:32 PM
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No Text. I changed my mind.
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Every artist is a cannibal; Every poet is a thief All kill the inspiration; and sing about the grief - U2
Say what you mean, and mean what you say.
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07-10-2006, 11:35 PM
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Originally Posted by thamior
well explain.
and Bika what dos NT stanbd for? |
I don't like typing out long posts dude, it's why I don't give critiques unless people piss me off >.>
Reference : where eagles soar
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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07-10-2006, 11:36 PM
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Wordsmith
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Originally Posted by Mystery
I don't like typing out long posts dude, it's why I don't give critiques unless people piss me off >.>
Reference : where eagles soar
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lol, ok, I'll leave you be.
Bika - so this lyric left you without comment... |
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