When the Eagles Soar - Writers Forum

ebmadman · 07-10-2006, 03:36 AM

Oh,
how my heart will roar, (hold) oh, when the eagles soar,(hold)

And mothers say, my baby
And fathers say, my son

We all say welcome home,
As the band plays on (hold)

Oh,
How my heart will roar,(hold) oh, when the eagles soar,(hold)

When children say, my daddy,
When lovers finally, touch

When soldiers finally come home
And we wont miss them all so much (hold)

(chorus *2)
This waiting game,
It only strengthens the pain.
Of lives that can't go on (hold)

We all await for the word,
Of our leaders that serve,
To heal our families hurt (hold)

Oh,
how my heart will roar, (hold) oh, when the eagles soar,(hold)

And mothers say, my baby
And fathers say, my son

We all say welcome home,
As the band plays on (hold)

Oh,
How my heart will roar,(hold) oh, when the eagles soar,(hold)

When children say, my daddy,
When lovers finally, touch

When soldiers finally come home
And we wont miss them all so much (hold)

(chorus *4)

Elipsis · 07-10-2006, 09:59 AM

not bad. Not a real fan of americana songs but oh well. Not much variation though the song but at least it had a good rythem. Work on on the way you type your songs out, It really helps with delivery.

Mystery · 07-10-2006, 01:29 PM

Eagles are about freedom, not pride.

ebmadman · 07-10-2006, 02:13 PM

Thanks for the comments, they are appreciated.

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 Eagles are about freedom, not pride.__________________

Well, I guess that depends on what you take pride in. Most people I know actually do take pride in their freedom.

Mystery · 07-10-2006, 04:25 PM

O <--- If this is the point

. <-- this is your grasp on the point

This will stay here ^^

ebmadman · 07-10-2006, 04:35 PM

Wow, how creative of you. I'm impressed by your imagination. "Eagles mean freedom". That's so deep. It's okay though, take your meds, you'll be fine.

thamior · 07-10-2006, 07:17 PM

I enjoyed this lyric, it was a bit different, but it worked well,

Mystery · 07-10-2006, 07:48 PM

Im done arguing so I won't leave this to pollute the forums.

ebmadman · 07-10-2006, 10:14 PM

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Go read one of my lyrics, youll soon understand im not a 13 year old bullshiting you and I have the authority to make these comments.
You make a shitty analogy, GJ, it fucked up your entire lyric. Next time Ill just slam you hard with it from the start

Oh, make no mistake Mystery, I have read some of your work. And you're right! No one on this forum would mistake you for a teenage bull@$&%er. For one, it would be an insult to the teenagers. Secondly, from what I've read I still dont see what supposed authority you're refferring too. I guess you're talking about those stale, unimaginative wordings of yours you call lyrics. But hey, I guess everyones great in the hollow realm of their own mind. Do me a favor; next time, live up to your screen name and provide some type of insightful criticism, or anything useful, as opposed to the normal, tired crap you usually spout. Because whenever you post something it's no mystery as to what it is......junk.

And thanks for the comments Thamior, they are appreciated.

Mystery · 07-10-2006, 11:02 PM

Im done arguing so I won't leave this to pollute the forums.

Elipsis · 07-10-2006, 11:05 PM

mm great vibe we have goin on here. Its like daddy just hit mommy at the dinner table and nobody wants to crit any more.

ebmadman · 07-10-2006, 11:47 PM

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I have nothing creative to say about your lyrics because just look at your attitude.."I cant go wrong and if anyone doesn't like what I say i will just flame them because I rule".
My standards are set to my level or writing.

What attitude? I posted a song on a message board. Never once did I utter that it was the greatest thing since sliced bread or that "I cant go wrong". And who else did I flame? Elipsises comments were of a disparaging type and I said nothing derogatory, in fact I thanked him for them. Yet, for some reason, you chose to talk about the meaning of birds. WTF? And no, I don't lie. I read your work, back when you were begging others on this sight to teach you how to rap. Remember that? Pathetic. Just face it dude, you're afflicted with message board ADD. You need the attention (which you obviously don't get from your songwriting), so you seek to start drama with incendiary responses, where none are needed. Get a life, and while you're at it, maybe a little originality.

Mystery · 07-10-2006, 11:59 PM

Im done arguing so I won't leave this to pollute the forums.

ebmadman · 07-11-2006, 12:05 AM

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Wow, you're comparing work from when I was 13 to work now...
You oversight the entire critisism where I show you what you write is crap...
You pretend to have a superior-than-though attitude and when faces with it throw out snappy retorts.

I compared your work because it's just that; your work. Don't get mad at me because it's pathetic. Your criticism, if you want to call it that, was nothing more than a rant of opinions based on nothing more than the fact that I pissed you off. Oh well. Maybe if you worked just as hard on your lyrics you wouldn't have to be such a biya to get attention. So sad.

Mystery · 07-11-2006, 12:08 AM

Im done arguing so I won't leave this to pollute the forums.