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Old 07-07-2006, 10:31 PM   #1
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Anyway

Another title I was considering for this one was "Perfect". Again, thanks so much for your opinions! I love reading your reviews! Feel free to leave constructive criticism, reviews, etc. Thanks so much!

"Anyway"

My nails are all uneven
From my new biting habit
Maybe I'm just uptight
It's nothing I'll admit.

You leave tire tracks on the lawn
And drive over the limit
You come home at dawn
And you just can't commit.

I don't condone accidents
But there always are mistakes
We don't mean to
But we make them anyway.

Sometimes I'm home late
Sometimes I raise my voice
We often debate
But you'll always be a choice.

You track mud on the floor
Forget to remove your shoes
The tile's not white anymore
But I am just amused.

I don't condone accidents
But there always are mistakes
We don't mean to
Though we make them anyway.

You bought me a jacket
In the summertime
I bought you a lemon
It tasted like lime.

The coat doesn't fit
You hate the taste of lime
We're both hypocrites
We don't seem to mind.

I don't condone accidents
But we all make mistakes
I know that you don't mean to
And I just love you anyway.

(I'm not sure if I should leave this last chorus in or not...)
I don't condone accidents
But there always are mistakes
We don't mean to
We just make them anyway
We just make them anyway.
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Old 07-07-2006, 11:02 PM   #2
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pretty good. That last line of the chorus
Quote:
But we make them anyway.
is the only part that i have a problem with. It just seems so out of place. other than that, not bad. Keep working on it!
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