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Old 07-07-2006, 08:37 PM   #1
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Difficult

Hey everyone! I'm back, with the second song I've ever posted. Thank you so much for the reviews on the first one! I really enjoyed reading them. Constructive criticism and other reviews are always appreciated! Thanks!

"Difficult"

(VERSE ONE)
We don't agree on much
We don't agree on anything
We argue about such and such
You blame it all on me.

(CHORUS INTRO.)
You call me crazy
You call me insane
If so, it's only because
I love you in vain.

(CHORUS)
All I wanted was
To fall in love with you
Why do you make that
So difficult to do?

(VERSE TWO)
I always said the rain's romantic
You laughed and turned away
So why do I feel so enchanted
At everything you say?

(VERSE THREE)
We don't hate each other
But we don't get along
Why do we even bother?
Maybe I'm just wrong.

CHORUS INTRO.

CHORUS

(BRIDGE)
I'm so wrong
I'm so wrong for you
I'm all wrong
I'm just wrong for you.

I can't make you happy
You're looking for someone
Well, she isn't me.

CHORUS INTRO.

CHORUS

Why do you make that
So difficult to do?
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Old 07-07-2006, 09:08 PM   #2
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It's not overcomplicated or striving to be the most ubelievable perfect thing ever, it has flaws but that add to the song, it's imperfect but beautiful
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Old 07-07-2006, 09:51 PM   #3
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not bad, not bad. It was pretty plain all around though. I guess when i read songs like these, i always think of a pop singer chick dancing around singing it. But try to be risky with your music. Break off from the normal and all the fads and try something new. Keep writing!
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